Monday, September 6, 2010

In The Shadows Comments

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the moon is my sun
the night is my day
for i hide in the shadows
and never come out
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Grace DeVon miller
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Kevin Carney 06 September 2010

Good poem, just keep going forward and as you fall stand up and step forward again. Writing can help with this. This is a nice write, its short but you honest emmotion is so well said in your words :)

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