In The Shadow Of The Leafless Tree Comments

very well placed I feel and see and walked in this shadow

O’ what a beautiful bouquet you splay before us -

Such beautiful words your poem holds. We will, indeed, be with ourselves until the end, therefor it's so important to be the kind of person we will always love. '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

the irony in the expressions 'leafless' and 'shadow' speaks volume of the intense pain the poem carries...good work...10

Rani this is truly beautiful. I love the occluded landscape. It's true; we will always have ourselves until our last instant of life; it's nice to sometimes think of that before the final breath is looming, don't you think? thanks..(smile)