Sunday, December 10, 2017

In The Shadow Comments

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Full moon rises over the glimmering ocean blue,
Out shining all the stars, brightening the sky anew.
From here on the surf tormented shore a carpet of white leads me to the horizon.
Where on tiptoes and with outstretched arms I could touch the sky,
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Jodie Hardy
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Dr Antony Theodore 10 December 2017

Where on tiptoes and with outstretched arms I could touch the sky, How I long to take one of the many beautiful stars and hold it to my heart. you will see me weeping at the end as the last verse........ very fine description of nature.. so fine and wonderful mixing it up with the deep sense of loss and depression.......love your description of nature........ this is powerful.. tony

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