Wednesday, March 9, 2016

In The Sea Of Anguish Comments

Rating: 5.0

How tormenting that these shallow sheets of mosses seem to drown me.
Its dampness seem to be arid and beyond confusing.
I lay here half alive if this is still how life is define.
I gaze at the stars and they seem too dull and too pale.
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Cherry Joy Clamor
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Anil Kumar Panda 26 April 2016

Seems a heartfelt lamentation on the loss of ones love. Beautifully done and it pierces through heart. Keep inking.

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Cherry Joy Clamor 26 April 2016

thank you. :)

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Dr Antony Theodore 09 March 2016

I have lost the essence of laughter as it was consumed by sorrow. Smile has become scarce that mornings arise in the wings of sullenness. The clouds cry in defiance of the colourful arc printed in the sky. No bright light seen at the edge of a penumbra. i will sail it than lose my dreams........ finally very pathetic. come out of the depressive mood and learn to live. life is a celebration. but we have to make it a celebration. tony

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Cherry Joy Clamor 09 March 2016

haha i am celebrating life. i tend to put my feet on other's shoes and breathe the air they breathe. in that way, i can put words. - joy

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