In The Same Space (Concrete Poetry) Comments

very interesting and it is good to feel a sense of fulfillment in love....(but as many feel unconditional love is only a myth, but need not be for many others)

Unique! I love anything different. I'm gonna read more. Dogg

So different! Two being one. Also two witnesses in agreement with one another! Great work; D

This is a first for me anyway good write

Very different and stunning style. Congrats.

Excellent concept and experimentation…both stand a unit one and each stands as unit one…is equal to without loosing identity Welcome your bold experiment Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

Yes, you have already erased the space within when you utter the last line so violently. 'the reason to live'. Its very violent to give love so higher throne. Idea of replicating time and existence and our personal passion, has been propounded sharply. But ask you, if you vanish the gaps within the broken lines whats the difference in meaning expression! ! May be a typographical visionary attracts the reader but its no doubt a gimmick. I expect your interaction. After all, the cruelty of life has been demonstrated wisely with a sensitive manism, beside this, our thirst for peaceful living condemning such daily hazards finds a shelter cryingly-- it has been also established skillfully. So you the poet again has gifted your readers a good poem. LIVE WITH YOUR NEW REASONS OF LIVING HAPPILY AND WRITE FOR US MORE........... Regards 10++ pranab