Thursday, March 5, 2009

In The Rain Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sneakers bounce against the wet, paved street.
Mysterious land-
That will never take me down the right path.
Wet hair against my back
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Alyssa Marquardt
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Kesav Easwaran 17 May 2009

beautiful piece, Alyssa...the mute pain inside comes out aloud in the end lines there...and crying out inside rain...thanks...i liked...10

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Alyssa Marquardt

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