In The Rain Comments
I walk outside to cry in the rain.
Let it wash away my sorrow.
Let it kill my pain
My tears fall downward onto the ground.
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“cry in the rain” has a good ring to it. This is a good metaphor of choice. It has a lot of potential. “laugh” and “path” is a clever rhyme.
Great use of emotion. I love this image of the rain to frame that of your tears. Very powerful.
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8/4/2025 6:36:33 AM # 1.0.0
Thanks for my comments. I love this poem.