In The Quietness Of The Moment Comments

Sometimes silence is the best doctor for the heart and soul..Lovely meditative piece, enjoyed it.Thanks for sharing, Almedia. With best wishes, Yelena.

Great title capturing the moment..in plain english just luvli makes the reader reflect in silence thanks and regards

‘Soul and I partnered… /all feel whole.’ ~ Enlightenment the small I [mundane/ephemeral ego] to find association with Big I [non-mundane/ Eternal] and to make one ‘ONE’ Where only Bliss exists…finest crossover and overlapping/ anchoring into the same ONE 10//10++ Ms. Nivedita UK

You hit a home run. I really like this one.

the heaviness of the heart melts down...a moment reflecting many such moments in life...i and the one in me inside...good concept...artistically told...10

Hi Almedia - An introspective poem which says so much in four doublets of verbal conciseness. Our MIND evokes both stress and rest - our HEART recieves succor from our EGO which always shows insight. Mind - heart - soul - spirit make us what we are. Working symbiotically they can restore our wholeness and bring us the solace we all seek - BEAUTIFUL. Thanks for sharing - Love thru Poetry - JOHN.

So high is your philosophical realisazation! So simply you have established 1) you- the smaller entity entangled by so many limitations and 2) You- The alter igo, the self of all selves, the infinite life-force ever-anew. And the base is a 'Moment'- where meets the past-present-future.1st 'I' will be no more on earth after a time-limit, but 2nd ' I ' have no beginning and ending according to Indian philosophy. Unique your writing skill. Where feeling stand on a concrete base, the writing will be so sharp and precise perhaps. WRITE MORE POET.... LIVE LONG TO WRITE........ Regards, 10++ pranab