In The Pyre Comments

a touchy write that made my eyes moist, , , it is difficult to accept the harsh fact of losing a loved one as it creates an immediate n sudden vaccuum in our life - Nothing can heal nor can any one replace the loss - but we all have to survive in this cycle of life, it moves on and so do we.

Lost Spouse is no less miserable than lost paradise, a heart touching poem.

Very poignant, intense anger at God for taking the heart and soul of your life. Your words, 'The only possession that I had within were oozing, drop by drop in tears from my eyes. I tried my best to hold them by clasping and closing my eyes. Those words resonated, hitting my mind and heart forcibly with major feelings and emotion. Wow! they stunned me with their meaning, brilliant and intensely, making me cry for you and your broken heart, Amitava.

A very moving write! Is it just a figment of your imagination or a tale of agony at the loss of a dear one? If it is real, believe that time will heal every wound!

Speaking poem..excellent write sir. Do read my poems and comment if you find them worth.

Sounds like the death of a love one. It will take sometime for a grieving heart to mend. a very poignant write my friend. things will get better soon. Have faith.