In The Puddles Comments

I really like this one especially the snappy 4th line of every stanza and they're all rhyming.

Very nice ending and a good variety of descriptions for the sun and lots of action.

Oh Ernestine, I have tasted nector before but I can't remember it being as sweet as this.It's an amazing piece of heart warming poetry.The flow was fantastic and you have the poets gift.Love Duncan

Quite a combination of -ings. It takes a great writer to have sound and subject matter so beautifully wedded. Susie.

Ernestine, I think your rhymes are pretty tight here, the repetition and variation, as well as gradual thematic progression, make it an enjoyable and 'worldly-wise' poem for me!

Very lovely and well written. This 10 is for you.