In the profundity of her eyes
Grey dark mystical clouds
Holding the weight of tears
Overwhelming sprinkle of storms
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A deep sublime soulful muse! A great poem in brevity! Kudos! Plz do read and comment your thoughts on my newest prose titled, " face veils/face masks same thing " as it fosters an understanding of the shared veiling practice btw east and west since history. I have received comments for it in my inbox though they don't show up under my poem yet.
'eyes.... Holding the weight of tears' have the potential to work up a tempest but more often than naught it is suppressed or withheld to preclude the possibility of any trouble in one's relationships. Thank you very much for sharing this profound poem.
In the deep field of eyes The sadness of separation Cultivating the tears..... Loneliness
The sad tale of a wounded heart - nicely described by the profundity of her eyes....I wonder what weight those tears must have carried. Loved it 100++
A poignant poem... liked it.5 stars