Thursday, August 13, 2020

In The Profundity Of Her Eyes Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the profundity of her eyes
Grey dark mystical clouds
Holding the weight of tears
Overwhelming sprinkle of storms
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Aarzoo Mehek
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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 July 2022

A poignant poem... liked it.5 stars

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 14 August 2020

A deep sublime soulful muse! A great poem in brevity! Kudos! Plz do read and comment your thoughts on my newest prose titled, " face veils/face masks same thing " as it fosters an understanding of the shared veiling practice btw east and west since history. I have received comments for it in my inbox though they don't show up under my poem yet.

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Prem Nizar Hameed 14 August 2020

A parched soul needs to be moistened. Excellent, Aarzoo.

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Rajnish Manga 13 August 2020

'eyes.... Holding the weight of tears' have the potential to work up a tempest but more often than naught it is suppressed or withheld to preclude the possibility of any trouble in one's relationships. Thank you very much for sharing this profound poem.

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Mahtab Bangalee 13 August 2020

In the deep field of eyes The sadness of separation Cultivating the tears..... Loneliness

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M Asim Nehal 13 August 2020

The sad tale of a wounded heart - nicely described by the profundity of her eyes....I wonder what weight those tears must have carried. Loved it 100++

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