Monday, January 1, 2018

In The Present Comments

Rating: 5.0

There's a feeling I get
that I don't understand:
How one becomes
such a melancholy man -
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Smoky Hoss
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Glen Kappy 11 January 2018

Hi, Smoky! Getting back to your poems again. I like the feel of this one and wonder, are you talking about the bittersweet thing that is this life? Or is it more like the first senryu of mine under the title Three Winter Poems? Or does it relate in part or some way to what I express in the third stanza of my poem Autumn Used to Tell? They can be elusive these things we feel sometimes. Blessings! -Glen

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Joseph Anderson 08 January 2018

A profound, thoughtfilled discourse on kife. It seems you and I atr paddling down the same stream.Love your rhymning abilities. Worth a 10

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Smoky Hoss 08 January 2018

Thank you Joseph. Wishing you well pal...

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Lyn Paul 01 January 2018

A great stage of life to be in. After doing all one can to grow and survive now just accepting what is in front of us. Thank You Smoky, a lovely poem.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 01 January 2018

Smoky, such an inspiring poem....10+++

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Lawerence Mize 01 January 2018

Wonderfully well written Smoky. It describes our current state. Thanks for sharing. Hope you had a nice holiday.

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Smoky Hoss 07 January 2018

Thanks Lawerence, I sincerely appreciate your comments. I tried to leave a comment on your beautiful poem Recurring Dream, as I really like that one. However, this website would not accept it, most likely because of the far too many commercials that are endlessly running (poorly) here. Take care my friend, hope you are well. Peace.

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