Tuesday, November 28, 2017

In The Presence Of Spring Comments

Rating: 5.0

Flashing pink splashes; budding promises;
The hard, wintry heart is surely softened
And present troubles are briefly halted.
Even in old bones, the primal pith is stirred
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upendra majhi 13 April 2019

well written /

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Aria Ligi 28 November 2017

Extremely well-written. It reminds one of an English countryside.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 November 2017

It is a beautiful poem on nature having stunning and thrilling expression. I like to quote... Precious purple stars of tulips unfold; A spirit, pure and joyous, fills the soul; Where time lets us be in lamb lightened days; Where love is a dove newly inspired; The hour of the fox club and the leveret; The hour of Hyacinth's ascension; Sweet scents whisper their secrets in the air Nice penmanship. Thank u dear Dominic, keep the ball rolling.10/10

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Dominic Windram 29 November 2017

Thanks so much for your insightful comments Kumarmani...much appreciated!

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