In The Play Yard Comments

A lovely poem. I can visualize the children playing so well. I guess we all have a child in us still if only we can embrace the fact - as you have done writing this for us all to read. Thank you.

I love your observations, Max. Just the fact that you CAN observe this shows the child in you still lives. Very well done.

Some nice observations here, Max.

I detect a touch of discipline in this well done poem. H

i like this poem max and when i saw your name i thought the colour blue AJS