Snow hard underfoot
Bare trees frost lined gleam in rows
Stars in a cold sky
Lovers clinging close for warmth
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Brief, but very beautiful. I like what you have seen from your window on the world. Warm regards, Sandra
You have captured much in this stark word painting - thoughtfully composed with a great contrast in the final line. Justine
You have captured the warmth of passion in the frost of your words. Succinctly penned - less is more. Excellent poem. love, Allie xxxx