Thursday, June 18, 2009
In The Old Days Comments
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I run fast
Faster than a tortoise.
I dive in the sea
Close to the shore.
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Sandra Fowler
18 June 2009
Very wistful and nostalgic. Great use of metaphor and simile. Your mother represents home to you. Memorable write. 10'10. Warmest regards, Sandra
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9/16/2025 12:51:47 PM # 1.0.0
Angst penned with a sigh and some clever, creaky images. I love your 'old ant' climbing the hill. Dear Nimal - the reader feels the pain of your homesickness. You communicate very well indeed. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥