Tuesday, September 25, 2012

In The Night I Wait Comments

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In the night I wait,
For slumber to take my eyes,
he will not have me.
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Nia Schexnider
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John Brown 15 April 2014

How sad. I don't agree with war either - it's all about making money, at the expense of innocent, and gullible young men.

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Nia Schexnider 03 March 2014

Khairul Ahsan, Thank you for reading this. and commenting. I appreciate it. Sometimes just one comment and one reader can help to alleviate the feeling of not being heard at all. Much appreciated.

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Khairul Ahsan 27 February 2014

While reading this beautiful poem of yours, I was simply amazed! You have so wonderfully painted the pain, insomnia, loneliness, and anxiety of a 'Military Wife'! 'Military life, Military strife, and me Military wife.' - Well said! 'you are not mine now. The governments property not free, not for me.' - A harsh reality. The note is heart touching. 'I don't believe in fighting for something or someone that you don't know. When he joined, it broke my heart.'

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