In The Nest Of A Sparrow Comments

Revisited. Fantastic captivating poetry. The flair and flow of imagination is inimitable. Loved it.

What an amazing write. The words picked me up and took me along with their wonderful images. I like the flow of this. I like the positive ending. It's like a little bit of magic. Thanks for brightening my day.

hey, jette! hoping this finds you well and thriving. checking to see if you had new postings, my attention lit of the title of this poem—there's a a curve-billed thrasher nest with chicks in it in the cholla on a corner of my house's property. the images in this poem are accessible, but i don't have anything in my experience to relate to the narrative as whole. would you mind telling me what it's about? -glen

You have a mysterious relation with that wraith. When it comes into your life it sweeps you away in the direction of dreams, then you find yourself in a new phase. Perhaps you are being readied to summon crows. Their message has changed since the times of bird augury.

Is this a rebirth or a discovery? Sometimes, it's hard to distinguish what is the precursor of who we are. By whatever origin or form, I know that you'll find fulfillment.10

Cycle of life and death and rebirth and oneness of all in nature comes out in highly imaginative and poetic way. Brilliant poem. Thanks for sharing Jetty.

Ever So Powerfully Beautiful! ! ! ! ! Deeply Moving! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Congratulations On Poem Of The Day! ! ! ! !

- the first lines of your intriguing poem, translated into Italian :) Quando nacqui uno spettro entrò dalla finestra e mi succhiò via il respiro. Mentre da cinereo diventavo nero Mi sfarinai tra le braccia del dottore e volai via, senza peso, come l'incanto di un passero che canta per chiamare i corvi.

It's amazing, how you depicted the non-ending voyage of life in nature, using metaphoric expressions. What really perpetuates is the conscience, which needs life for it's errand. Congrats for being the member's PoD. Thanks for sharing.X

What a depiction of the journey of the soul. Quite imaginative. Good theme.

You metamorphosed into so many lovely things But at the end, It was really Poetry that gave you your wings. What a beautiful poetic union with life and nature, a real pleasure to read. Well deserved poem of the day.!

The imagery is most intriguing. Nicely written!

A beautiful poem. Amazing! This certainly is Pure Poetry Words you just want to keep reading.

Ahhhh, I love the unique style of this! This is pure poetry from start to finish, the meter is outstanding taking the reader from one dimension to the next in a poetic wave of emotions! ! Just an awesome poem, congratulations

Congratulations on your poem being chosen as POD'. Well written. The imagery was magnificent. Great job Jette!

No longer able to fly. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

When the body is not permanent, soul is churned with perpetual running wheel of birth and death. A very meaningful poem about the reincarnation process. Congrats.

The colorful imagery leaps of the page and nests within the reader! Congratulations on having been showcased as the Member Poem of the Day! You are truly deserving given your talent!

A very imaginative write about the journey of soul that takes birth again and again after death and in various forms Your poem is very akin to Hindu philosophy which states that our soul never dies and takes rebirth after death.Like we change our clothe after it is torn, so do the soul takes a new body after the old body dies. Congratulations for being selected as Poem of the Day. Bharati Nayak

Such a brilliant write, Jette. Congrats for being chosen... a huge 10+++++