Friday, June 26, 2020

In The Nest Comments

Rating: 5.0

Let us hope there will be a sunny day,
A long waited day for the tired clay,
Followed by clouds, lightning, thunders and rains,
A day of washing the mud stains,
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M Asim Nehal 05 July 2020

Crafty poem. My pick from the poem: The poet listens to the sound of pen at the sky The sky though already blue becomes shocking blue, The lonely bird dreams a message, " I still love you.

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Anil Kumar Panda 03 July 2020

Love wins at last. Though life goes through many turmoils if love is given a chance to survive between two souls then life is heaven. Nice poetry. Thanks for sharing.10+++

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Khalid Saifullah 28 June 2020

A place to live and love, nest is the best.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 28 June 2020

now we read each other less and lesser boredom sets in perhaps but you still remain in my mind a wonder black clouds asunder

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Mahtab Bangalee 26 June 2020

In all shocking, In all sadness There is rhyming beautifully the hope There is rhyming beautifully the love For beautiful life.......

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 June 2020

In a beautiful sunny day a flower blooms and smiles. In nest beautiful birds rest and chirp in spring. In sunny day light reflects emotion. Love wipes their tears and the ego is now in exile. We feel and see the eyes of love. This poem is interestingly penned.

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