Saturday, December 26, 2009

...In The Name Of Friendship (1) Comments

Rating: 4.9

It all started in the name of friendship
As fun in our compound
Seeing both merry-go-round
Acting as serious as convert
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Friendship is a fantastic fource indeed. Well said my friend.

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masked lady 01 January 2010

Very True, some loves like mine started from the name of friendship. Sometimes, someone would only hope, it would have been better if the friendship remain the way it is. Very nice poem! keep writing! GOD BLESS!

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masked lady 01 January 2010

Very True, some loves like mine started from the name of friendship. Sometimes, someone would only hope, it would have been better if the friendship remained the way it is. Very nice poem! keep writing! Thanks for sharing my friend.

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Arthur Crissey 30 December 2009

interesting poem it makes you look forward to the development of the relationship. you could even imagine a story or novel in verse.

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Louis Rams 28 December 2009

two poeople falling in love usually starts off as friendship. very good write.

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Romeo Della Valle 27 December 2009

Great work, well penned, knowing for a fact that love always derives from an honest friendship, growing stronger (with its ups and downs) through time and remaining still a friendship...Two bodies embraced in one soul...keep it up! you got a great talent and plenty to show to the whole world...! ! ! 10++++

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Dr.subhendu Kar 26 December 2009

A small thing that should have no impact But no one would say, “I’m wrong”....................... simply truth as you paints art of human traits, friendship ruefully loses its strength by vision, beautiful write,10+++, thanks for sharing

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Amber {lil coastie]} 26 December 2009

i liked how u did the over all rhythm in this poem.

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