Thursday, November 17, 2005
In The Monastery Comments
Rating: ★5.0
sitting meditation created pain
my legs being wooden
so I loved walking mediation
especially one night
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Michael Philips
17 November 2005
This is an interesting and unusual poem. You have some nice images here - the opiate pillow and the wind overwhelming the heartbeats are my favorites.
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8/9/2025 10:07:23 AM # 1.0.0
Charles, your work is so very vivid yet surreal. I think this is a rewrite (correct?) but I can't for the life of me see what you changed, or even why you needed to. Another excellent vignette though.