Sunday, February 1, 2009

In The Moment Comments

Rating: 5.0

Darkness restricts vision while hands roam,
Bodies create friction as sweat forms.
Clothes shed as your scent lingers,
Passion overflows with the exploration of your fingers.
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Christopher Montalvo
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Ahtivah Lawton 10 October 2009

this poem is so sexy but yet respectful to a women if she was to read it....10 10 10....so jealous write now

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Rhonda Moody 23 July 2009

Wont even say how that made me feel.... but it was well written....10

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Surya . 01 July 2009

passion is rampant. i could feel it too. voted10 surya

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J Baker 27 February 2009

I love the way you have taken your emotions and made people feel the passion from a few select words. Jemx

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Christopher Montalvo

Christopher Montalvo

Brooklyn, NY
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