Saturday, October 4, 2008

In The Mirrored Eyes Comments

Rating: 4.9

When the island of our eyes
Soaks in the rain
Take my hands friend
Purify my heart
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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE
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Shabre Moore 22 January 2009

its deep thats really deep were u sad when u wrote that cause its sounds like it cause i know when i'm feeling a certain way i'll write how i feel at that time an keep it as a memory thats y asked

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Rachel Butler 28 November 2008

Thank you for sharing..Your words made me hold my breath as I read

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Ema Nekaf 24 November 2008

Great structure. Great wordage. Great imagery. Great poem.

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Written so well... great work here krista

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Sarah Abdullah 15 October 2008

Simple Words Million Meanings Great how with Simple Lines you gave a Great Message

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Annie Girl 15 October 2008

OMG breathtaking no words to say except wonderful work :)

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wah! ! ! ! love it you are a very good poet. -brie

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Charlotte Davis 11 October 2008

wow! thatz all i can say

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Carol Rhodes 11 October 2008

NICE. VERY POIGNANTLY EXPRESSED AND EMOTIONS AND FRIENDSHIP CLEARLY FELT. YES, YOU ARE A POET. THANK YOU! CAROL

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Reshma Ramesh 10 October 2008

very well penned loved this one

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Anna jonson 07 October 2008

goood poem with a beautiful composition...............beautiful.....

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Cathleen Hodgkinson 07 October 2008

Nothing more beautiful than the divine unconditional friendship of two souls...great poem! -Cathy

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Evaughn Gray 06 October 2008

that was beautiful, it was nice, soft and very tender! loved it, great poem goes with a great poet~Hazel G.E

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Brianna Wilshusen 06 October 2008

I love the wroding, very interesting.10

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C. P. Sharma 06 October 2008

Heartfelt your poem. Arcane.

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Linda Weischedel 05 October 2008

Very well written.....I enjoyed it. Giving it a 10.

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 05 October 2008

The eyes, indeed, are the 'mirror' of our souls. We are ALL related. Nice poem.

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Tsira Goge 05 October 2008

nightingale, it is very warm poems - an oath of friendship which is very much appreciated/// 10... Tsira

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Cheung Shun Sang 05 October 2008

You and your friends not a two seeing through eyes, very good poem

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Enigma Forever 05 October 2008

its the world in jus 10 lines...awesome write

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