Thursday, May 29, 2008

In The Mirror Comments

Rating: 5.0

I see my life disappear
into thin air like a balloon.
I see everything disappear.
I see my whole body
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The Native Emo
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dang..this is a realy good poem i loved it imm like this in a way cryin a shxt bout ur ma n dad thats how mine are... 10/10 :)

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Kasie Chavez 08 March 2010

i am just lyk u in a way. love that you do this in class. must be BOH-RING! ur creativity is unlike any other person, it's so unique. I beet now that evryone would ask 4 ur talent.

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Iron Panda 23™ 17 February 2010

woah o.o thats deep....i likes it :) just wonderin...did u get a good grade on this? ? o.o'

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Violet Dawn 08 January 2010

very good, sometimes i feel the same way. keep writing. read some of my stuff.[:

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Shekhar Joshi 02 July 2009

very sad poem.........nicely done.......u expressed your feelings quite good......... good work...... ;)

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DELETED NOW 23 July 2008

I feel the same way gurl... my family is broken my feelings are sad and mad but on the outside I'm happy.... my life is a long story. indide make sure u change that to inside cuz i know that's what u meant. 'empty indide me.'

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