Monday, November 10, 2008

In The Midst Of War Comments

Rating: 5.0

in the midst of war with bodies lying on the ground
walks a band of children-their families can't be found
searching through the rubble of homes that used to be
looking for food and clothes just to survive
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Linda Winchell 10 November 2008

I loved this one. Great meaning filled words. War is horrible! God Bless, Linda

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Pretty good i like that its about war and fighting it.. Great write

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