Tuesday, August 17, 2021

In The Midst Of Doubt Comments

Rating: 5.0

It moves steadily towards you in the most stealthy way possible... sound less and track less as it approach your site... moving in on you like a sunset that leaves the skies in shadows of doubtful memoirs....shadowing you in all ways that demotes you...leaving you doubful of the unknown realities of night fall... no noise no sound just a loud emphasis of silence...creeping in on you and ready to devour you...hear my soul as it crumbles in doubt of royal uncertainties...hear me scream a silent cry and hug me tight to scrub that pain away... promise to never leave my side in the mist of doubt..
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Boledi R Petja 18 August 2021

I am glad the poem hugged you in spirit and allowed you to feel. As far as you are geographically, just know that you matter and your response to my poem assured me that I got this... Thank you so much for the experience

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 18 August 2021

this well-written poem has gave me comfort for the stuggles i am facing this year Bravo!

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Unnikrishnan E S 18 August 2021

Truely enchanting write. " leaving you doubful of the unknown realities of night fall... no noise no sound just a loud emphasis of silence." Every silence of the inner soul? Full score dear poet

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Boledi R Petja 18 August 2021

Thank you so much for the qoute

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