Saturday, July 25, 2009

In The Midst Of Diversity Comments

Rating: 5.0

Unique in a way all humans are,
Some can’t accept it that’s why they war.
We are the people who are diverse.
We are called in diverse sectors.
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Peter Vector 31 December 2009

Obed, I see what you mean now of the striking similarities of these poems. Must say I do enjoy your description more than my own work. I had happen to write this some many months ago also, but had not until now typed it, but I must say you do captivate much more emotion and imagery in your work, very wonderful indeed.10

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Rajaram Ramachandran 17 August 2009

'Unity in diversity'' is the order of the day. United we stand, divided we fall is another way of telling about the unity. What all you say in this poem should be written in golden letters, which should open the eyes and ears of the present day troubled world.

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Isaac Maliya 08 August 2009

True to the word, we are diverse yet we are one!

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Beauty Philosophy 08 August 2009

Diversity in human beings is what makes the charm of every single person. Very well penned!

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Joseph Poewhit 03 August 2009

People all have different ways, but yet, are all the same around the world. We all come from the family of NOAH,8 persons, to around 9 billion.

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Stephanie Starr 31 July 2009

ohh i love this one. The writing is beautiful, the message is enthralling, and the rhyming is flawless. good job.

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Kafil Uddin Raihan 28 July 2009

My fellow men, we are human beings, That has rationality and feelings. May all of us avoid bad happenings. Lead for change and restore the broken wings. awesome writing, actually it is high time for us to reach to the peoples and say what are they doing? cheers with 10++++

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Ency Bearis 26 July 2009

a nice advocacy write for peace and unity....well narrated...10

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 25 July 2009

Very idealistic. In reality there are issues like racism, arrogance, prejudice, and sheer vulgarity - some writers engage in these and when you encounter them, you need to read this poem again, Stay strong and keep writing the truth.

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Susan Aparejo 25 July 2009

Hello, I find your poem speaking the learning cultural diversity in my field. They are so unique that youre able to described them very well. If you have time pls read my poem ' happiness, ' courage, Intelligence' Thanks much. Youre poem is 10+++

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Obed dela Cruz

Obed dela Cruz

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