Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

South Africa (eDutywa, Mfenguland, staying in Cape Town)
Saturday, June 16, 2012

In The Middle Of The Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

Old as I am
the feeling attacks,
Strangles my heart and
jails the beloved mind
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Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)
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Pheko Motaung 20 June 2012

A strong poem! Well thought out and strong lines.Well done

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Arianne Owens 19 June 2012

good poem :) I like it!

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Neela Nath Das 18 June 2012

His touch and memory will be haunting you, because you don't want to forget it.It's so loving! Anele, great!

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 17 June 2012

People say that Time is the real remedy to heal our unseen wounds, but why the memory of our loved ones hurts us again and again? ? No one knows the answer. Good poem! !

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Swetha Vanakayalapati 17 June 2012

its very great in feel...the emotion behind the words flow thr the lines making it more special to a father and his warmth....unconditional love that pours out of his heart for his younger one.............once again you proved pen is mighty...but this it has a soul! !

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Eric Cockrell 16 June 2012

grief chsels faces in stone... very good poem.

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Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

South Africa (eDutywa, Mfenguland, staying in Cape Town)
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