Thursday, January 3, 2019

In The Middle Of Nowhere Comments

Rating: 4.1

Our thoughts are lame as we drink our future in wine
Whiles we walk on our dreams blindfolded,
Straight down the gutters like swine
And leaving our fats of worries unsolved,
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Jcson Jenuis
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Sylvia Frances Chan 19 September 2022

NATIVE is obsolete, who are THE NATIVE FACES? ! OUR Smiles on NATIVE faces, very impolite line, this concluding line brings a very black shadow on the fascinating poem. SCHADE! say the German people

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Sylvia Frances Chan 19 September 2022

Congratulations with the Member Poem Of The Day. A thought-provoking poem, the last stanza needs to be altered, that line comes forth from a not clean vision, I cite the words here: Lightening our smiles on native faces, In the middle of nowhere

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UNNIKRISHNAN Sivasankara Menon 19 September 2022

Good poem. Congratulations on POD. please have a look at my poem "A Road in the middle of nowhere "

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Jcson Jenius 19 September 2022

Go f u ck yourself!

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Chinedu Dike 07 January 2020

Nicely expressed thoughts and feelings. An insightful piece of poetry written with conviction. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Kingsley Egbukole 06 January 2020

In Africa, we misplace priorities and plame the gods. We must take our destinies in our own hands. Beautiful poem.

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Bharati Nayak 06 January 2020

Hey it a new year eve, And our dreams are unfolding For all pictures painted in our thoughts drawn into reality, Hey there the future lies in our hands, Till we dig out the cassavas of joy And harvest great smiles of our toils, - - - - - - - A fantastic poem for the New Year! Congratulations for being selected the Poem of the Day!

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Mahtab Bangalee 06 January 2020

changing attire never can change the real inside changing resolution diary never can change the inside intimacy eviI soars by own wings to taste the time newly saint flutters by own wings to taste the time newly new time never finds new taste by new costume old becomes new guest! !

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Mahtab Bangalee 06 January 2020

Come let us pray till our griefs are read, And the little answer we awaits on our story, As our labor fruits waves bye to our baskets....../// beautiful new year poem; beautiful efforts of praying

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Sylvia Frances Chan 06 January 2020

CONGRATS being chosen twice, as the Member Poem Of The Day. Hurray! Last year 6 January 2019 and today 6 January 2020. Happy New Year to you JJ. A powerful poem into the steps of a new yaer. Excellently worded and with great self confidence, Jcson! I have enjoyed very much. A 10 Full Score.

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Mahtab Bangalee 06 January 2019

new year eve.. Lightening our smiles on native faces/// beautiful new years poem

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Lyn Paul 06 January 2019

A bright blessing for the new year. Thank You

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Naila Rais 06 January 2019

Wonderful piece..... Congratulations! ! ! Happy new year 2019 belated... Naila

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Anil Kumar Panda 06 January 2019

A nice poem on new year. Congrats on being selected poem of the day.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 06 January 2019

Wonderful and thought provoking welcome to new year with great self confidence. Congrats on poem of the Day.

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 January 2019

We drink our future in wine! ! To dine with life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Adrian Flett 06 January 2019

'For all pictures painted in our thoughts drawn into reality, ' We do hold the future in our own hands, may we do better this time.'Till we dig out the cassavas of joy'

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Prabir Gayen 06 January 2019

Very good poem... congratulation for pod...........

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Ramesh T A 06 January 2019

Indeed we are in the middle of nowhere knowing the misfortunes of past and not knowing what next will happen! Congratulations for the selection of your poem as Member Poem of the Day, my friend!

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Jcson Jenuis 03 January 2019

Happy New Year to all readers and poets

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