Wednesday, June 24, 2009

In The Middle Comments

Rating: 5.0

THE WORDS me n u was then, the word 'us' is now
the relationship doesnt seem true
when in it its always, i, me, never we any how...you
we have 2 meet in the middle...
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krissi b'williams
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Bhaswat Chakraborty 27 June 2009

I find genuine depth in your lines, '...what makes us real the simplicity n tough tasks if it were so easy, everyone would be in love...' So, despite your modesty, I'll request you to keep writing good poetry....10...

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true words about true love..very well expressed friend...

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Eyan Desir 25 June 2009

I also hate relationship with ups and downs I believe if ppl are open and understanding there will be less promblems good write full marks

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