Thursday, February 13, 2020

In The Middle Comments

Rating: 4.5

Matthew is in a tight spot
Between the funny boy, John
And the serious man, Sean
Everyone is awed of what he does
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Valsa George 20 March 2020

Matthew, having entered his teens has discarded most of his childish trends and has become mature. In his school he obeys the rules. Even when he is under peer pressure to violate the rules, he withstands all such temptations with the right guidance from his parents. Matthew is presented as an ideal student for all children to emulate.

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Valsa George 20 March 2020

Some children are exceptional. They combine seriousness and frolic in a desirable manner and behave mature even at a young age. They have the prudence and discretion to do things in the proper way at the right age.

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Mahtab Bangalee 15 March 2020

Middle School is wonderful And life is colorful Despite the turns and twists Matthew's parents guide him Through the years. beautiful poem penned on the flowing wave of time the life will be changing its motions

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Edward Kofi Louis 23 February 2020

Throughout the years! ! Parenthood, Schooling, Taking care of the children. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 20 February 2020

The proper guidance of the parents is quite crucial for a teenage child to overcome the critical stage of his life......10++++❤️

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Anil Kumar Panda 18 February 2020

A nice poem on changing of attitudes as one grows up. He is now in his teens and experiencing the change in his body and behavior. Very nicely crated. Loved it.

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Rosie Bourget 16 February 2020

I command you for your praise and Acknowledgment to Matthew. Students need to know when they are doing well, even if it's just a little pat on the back. Good job Marie

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Rosie Bourget 16 February 2020

Indeed, self-doubt and anxiety are part of the trip, but I believe this young man will make the journey through high school without acute or lasting distress.

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Rosie Bourget 16 February 2020

Based on your poem Marie, it appears that Matthew is well-prepared for middle school. Without a doubt, he has all the confidence in the world to be successful. That’s why he feels it is so cool to be in middle school.

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Aniruddha Pathak 15 February 2020

The one in the middle seems to play vain fiddle, but unless you move to the extreme, be it on the side of grim, or cream, one remains in the middle school, playing a life-long fool..., But this is being flippant, no doubt the poem's sans any dent, and verges on excellent.

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Anjandev Roy 14 February 2020

Well representation. Thank u. anjandev roy.

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Kesav Easwaran 14 February 2020

A change of place may induce change in behavior also. Your poem shows your ability to observe keenly the life around you. Enjoyed your well written poem 10+

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Akhtar Jawad 13 February 2020

Life changes with the age, our liking and preferences also change. A beautiful poem.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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