In The Mid Of The Night, Depression You Are Killing Me.. Comments

What is the writing from, in the large black box on the screen? Is that by you, also, Naila?

I am waiting for ......hope filled life for joy and comfort and love. tony

The one who will take me to heights, The one who will care for me, Or make me want to live, When I'm ready to die.

line 14 " I'm " DOES mean " I am" , but it sounds very strange to me used here. I really don't know what an English language 'expert' would say about it. Just in case this is/was about YOU, i'm glad it is from 2 years ago, not today. Maybe i commented 2 yrs. ago? " When I'm irritating though" i would delete " though" last line " it's" , not " its" . ;) to MyPoemList bri :)

very deep words from a deep heart. keep writing poet

Dear Poet, I read as well as listened to your poem In the Mid of the Night..It's heart-touching and evocative. Thank you.

there are no words for the stupendous poem you have written. just loved it...........................

Hi Naila Rais, thanks for visiting my blog. those were still my efforts as still I am quite young

your style is simmilar to mine, i hope you feel better soon, i know you will. best wishes...

Tremendous hand of poem

Your poem is so relatable beautifully expressed longings of a loner

Depressed pressing onward alone makes for misery in the moonlight. Hope comes subtle or sudden like a cloud clearing or the lumens casted by bulb. Sometimes we can control and other times we can not, so as I too suffer. For that there is this, I press the thought sudden alone is found with itself, and subtle companionship sheds light.

touched by your poem, could feel your pain. you may dwell in sorrow but don't let it consume your sensitive soul.

I encourage you to read more and write more, thanks for sharing.

Deep feelings expressed with clarity of thought and mind. A work of an intricate mind. Thanks for sharing Naila.

A great poem! Each stanza articulates a different dazzling facet of this poem! I will find time to revisit it. To MyPoemList (10)

I am a little confused - is this one poem or two. One sings about hope and waiting and the other is suicidal. Well, I pray for your wait to get over and for your being happy. From the literary point of view, I liked the one on depression more. Each word in it has the mood of the weeping theme. I like your passion for poetry and the flow in your write. (10)

Our soul in human body is fragile and weak, our emotions roll one upon another like waves in the sea, our mood swing flows like wind, Night is always scary for some and fruitful for others, you narrated the dark part of the night very appropriately, the best part of the depression is that it goes away once you take charge of your body and emotions. This is a thought provoking poem. Full marks to you for this poem 10+++++++++

stay calm and patient..good times will also come..hard days teach us how to fight with situations..stay blessed and happy always..keep writing..we love your poems

A well written poem Naila with very deep feelings.Time tends to change always.Nothing remains static in our life...if there is a problem, then, there will be a solution too..be strong, you are a great writer...we should always be proud of what we are having rather than on regretting what we don't have....you are born with such a great writing skill, everyone has a struggling part in his or her life...