Monday, July 20, 2009

In The Market Place Comments

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I hear the honk of a horn
Amid the echo of voices.
A new day had been born
And for people to make their choices.
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Atara Feildsofrainbows 05 October 2009

Some of the tenses could be fixed and this could be a little smoother, but over all this is quite a moving work.

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Rovert Nworb 20 July 2009

I can see it in my head, well done

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