Tuesday, December 1, 2015

In The Locker Comments

Rating: 5.0

I do not keep invoices in the locker.
nor way bills, too.
if anything is ever stolen -
God sees it soon.
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Liza Sud
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Mannah Shekh 08 December 2015

So meaningful.. Poem... Love the poem.. Thank you dear poet

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Chuy Amante 07 December 2015

break the chains that bind the heart of man, smash the locks, enter the golden mind! and spread love Divine! who will be first?

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Daniel Brick 05 December 2015

This is a Poem of sweetness and light. The light that shines from it is your determination to live a generous and caring life even though circumstances may make caution and prudence more likely choices. The sweetness lies in the closing affirmation of goodness: you want both locks and hearts open You display largeness of heart in wanting both. I know these are not just words on paper but your sincere TRUST and FAITH. There is a halo around this poe, .

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Shahin Latif 01 December 2015

Lovely poem. Your work is good ink! Excellent narrated. I enjoyed & motivated this poem. So, take my love dearest poet Liza Sud. May ALLAH bless you. Be well always.

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