Saturday, March 29, 2008

In The Lap Of The Sun Comments

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There are many kids (mean nine planets)
Tiny and huge
In the lap of the Sun
They have been living peacefully
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Abdul Razaq
sun
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I AM SOOO OUT OF HERE 19 June 2008

Very well done my friend. Philosphy at it's best. Will be reading more of your fine work. Mel

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Cathleen Hodgkinson 06 April 2008

Abdul- I agree with Greenwolfe 1962...'This is a work of an artist. a solid element in a universe of chaos'. I really do like your perspective with each of your writings that I've read...keep writing! Cathleen

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Greenwolfe 1962 04 April 2008

That's certainly an interesting philosophical perspective. This is the work of an artist. He makes use of one thing to explain another. A solid element in a universe of chaos. GW62

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Katherine Wiley 31 March 2008

abdul-you have several poems now, and they are very nice! I liked this one. kat

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faisalabad, pakistan
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