Saturday, June 28, 2014

In The Lap Of Nature Comments

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Plaguing days at noon
Scorching sunshine in the month of June
I visited an orchard.
Saw mangoes loaded on trees
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Sameer Ahsan
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 06 July 2014

Now this is a marvelous poem in skilful rhyme and imagery. Not many poets can write like dis. Wow nice to fall asleep in nature's lap. As an indian i apreciate mangoes as the king of fruits. Thanx n Ramazan mbaruk.

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A good poem and recited in such spirit.

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Sameer Ahsan

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