Wednesday, January 29, 2014

In The Land Beyond The Sun Comments

Rating: 3.7

When the time comes that I vanish,
Remember me when I am gone.
When my footprints fade away
To the land beyond the sun.
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Fiona Schwartzinoff
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 09 February 2014

Wow a fantastic imaginative invocation to the love of yor life. Likd the take on honey too. Pls do review my latest poem too.

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Mac Adrone Adonay 07 February 2014

a good expression of thoughts, a poem in a beautiful rhythm.. :)

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Sandra Feldman 30 January 2014

Too sad for your age but beautifully sad, so inspired, goes right to the heart.

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