In The Hush Of Eve Comments

'It fell like rain into my lovelorn heart' - aha, so nice and soothing! 'And the moon riding in the palanquin of clouds' - aha, so poetic flight of thoughts, I can only exclaim in joy rather than write a word or two! 'In the open, I sat long like a sculptured figure' - an example of perfection of translating thoughts into words! An excellent poem,10/10 from me!

Thank you... I was in need of beauty being spilled over my day today! ! ! Lovely as usual, my dear Valsa. And I have a thing about doves===they are building a nest in the evergreen in my front yard- -so I get twice blessed today. 10+++++++++++++++++++++

Valsa, what a gift—no matter how many times we may experience it—for something in nature to enlighten our seeing, and you’ve captured such a moment well in this poem. The title, The Hush of Eve, is mellifluous and evocative. My favorite line is, I sat long like a sculptured figure—which conveys the pleasure and the wanting to make it last. -Glen

It is a pleasure to read an account of a blisfull evening through your pen and walk the place through your eyes, and feel all the tender emotions through your heart. All we have to do is to keep our hearts open to such beauty. thanks Valsa.

maybe " she heard" at start of line 2? i'm not sure who is speaking of whom. it's not one of my favorite poems of yours. but i enjoyed these lines: " And the day paving way to night In darkness, fireflies dancing in delight" At first i thought this would be a poem written by Adam about his joy over Eve keeping her mouth shut, especially about apples! bri ;)

It's really a gift to have the tender feelings of the mind been roused by the crooning of a dove and to have been hailed to emotional heights. It is certainly the symptom of greatness of a mind to sit long immersed in nature's rythm and to feel brimmed with umpteen desire. Thank you Valsa George

A 10 and myriad 10's more for this fabulous poem.

A summum of love and all that is beautiful. When the mind is in poetic gear, it stirs many loveliest spots around. Most beautifully formulated, Valsa, You are still loyal to the classics. The picture added represents the summum of love.I have enjoyed very much your poem about all that is in optima form. God's Blessings in Abundance for you

Part - 2 palanquin of clouds, blowing of perfumed air are some of marvelous sights that you have observed keenly. I appreciate much the way of presentation of this poem with loving graphic. This poem is going to my poems list. Thank you dear madam for sharing this gem. A10.

Part - 1 A captivating expression has been made on a tranquil evening where your observation has come to an umpteen outlook. The passionate crooning of a dove, bright sheen of pearls on trees, resting wobbly on the edge of leaves, scent coming from opening flowers, dancing of fireflies in delight in darkness, riding of moon in the

beautiful poem; /// love brings unity unity, always the togetherness is beautiful

The trigger point is the dove crooning, and then emotions flow forth. Beautifully depicted.

Gratitude expressed for a perfect evening! This is what makes life so profound. This verse goes to myfavourites.

'Heard the passionate crooning of a dove Under the eaves, it sat close to her love What delight, that sound instantly gave'....the subsequent emotions triggered in the heart are very naturally depicted with beautiful similes...indeed a lovely poem Valsa 10+++++

This is a poem of gratitude, but the speaker is restrained in her expression She doesn't prioritize things but treats all things as equal.. The title tells us there is an extraordinary silence in nature but I feel it is also in her inner being. She has almost merged into nature herself. Her quiet thinking sustains the world. We can be grateful for that also.

I am very sure that you could be spending a lot of time to get definitive version of your poem….that is why your poems sparkle like diamonds! I find illustrious beauty in your poetry! I take this great poem to MyPoemList….10

A magnificent piece of poetry replete with imagery! Your keen poetic observation of ‘crooning of a dove’ ‘palanquins of clouds’ among others are just fabulous! I was moving from stanza to stanza (Stanza 1 to stanza 7) to trace series of things that have captured your imagination! You have brilliantly streamlined events one after other and placed them in order! Beautifully structured and brilliantly drafted (Part 1)

A well composed wonderful poem, dear Ma'am Valsa.....10+++++

The magnetic spell of the passionate crooning of a dove on the lovelorn mind and it's aftermath effects on the perception of the mind about marvelous natures manifestations spread around have been amazingly portrayed in this fabulous poem, as always. Thanks for sharing a passionate muse flowing joyfully.10+++ points.

Dear Valsa, the images in your poem are breathtaking.