In The Hospital Comments

I found this to be a very moving poem. Well written, painting a vivid picture for your readers.

a good poem with a nice flow white angles around me with drips in my vein to bring me into normal life with all possible means.

I have a very small box where I keep my greatest pain. I can not lend you mine, but you can find your. Mine is like a Pandora's box. That's where I'm wise and very old. Sometimes I open it and weep. Beautiful poem

Lovely memories, but I would forget the past, look into the future, you are still young. It could of been worst if you marry her.

I really like this poem, my dear.....both the enchanting flow and sharp, deep thoughts of an old man.Great! ! !