Saturday, May 20, 2006

In The Heat Of The Night! Comments

Rating: 5.0

The stars are glimmering ultra bright,
As the wind gently carresses them ever~so~right!
He approaches seductlively,
Much to her delight!
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Kristin Nicole RothDavis
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Ebone' Ingram 09 August 2006

I like the ending very much. And I like the rest of the poem too. You rock. Eni da kid

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IT'S GETTIN HOT IN HERE, KRISTEN...IT'S NOT BAD ENOUGH THAT YOUR COMPLIMENTS ON MY WORK HAS SWELLED ME HEAD UP LIKE A ZEPLIN (un LED-ed, that is) , NOW YA GO MELTIN UP MY PC! YOUR FIANCE IS A LUCKY MAN, YOUNG LADY...PASSION IS LIFE & THOSE WHO EMBELLISH IN IT W/ ABSOLUTE LOVE, MOST ALWAYS ARE BLESSED WITH LIFES FINEST FRUITS...EXCELLENT PIECE OF CFAFT...SMOOTH AS SILK..... FRESH, AS TH' FIRST ROSE OF SPRING...AND HOT AS HELL! ! ! DON'T MIND ME...JUST HAVIN' SOME FUN W/ YA! ...GREAT WRITE ONCE AGAIN, KRISTEN....FRANK

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Kristin Nicole RothDavis

Kristin Nicole RothDavis

Southern Oklahoma... <country gal here>
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