Friday, July 12, 2013

In The Heart Of An Angel Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the heart
of an angel
lies the truth

In the heart
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Dave Alan Walker
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Persian Khushi 06 August 2013

Absolutely true... thought provoking... free will... good or evil..

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 04 August 2013

I see there is no good, there is no evil, only life experiences. Many is teaching us that never do it again, which is good. Many times the good can turn into bad and the bad turn into very good, like we are lucky if we did not get something, later we find it out.

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Sesan Falade 03 August 2013

sooooooooooooooooooooo true

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Kalpana Shah 01 August 2013

short and sweet... do visit ur imagination on my site as my name describes - kalpana

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Yasmin Khan 27 July 2013

We have two chambers one for devil, other for angel. Which one overpowers it depends on our will.

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Anil Kumar Panda 27 July 2013

yeah that's true.nicely done.liked it.

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 25 July 2013

agree with Payal, short, simple, but precise hit to the heart really love it

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Yewande Adedokun 24 July 2013

precision dominates. good job friend

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Patricia Grantham 22 July 2013

I love the lines that said in the heart of a few lies the Devil. Good always overcome evil just as the light casts out the dark. Loved this one Dave.

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Unwritten Soul 19 July 2013

And In the heart of human there are two chambers Angel side or Evil hide Which one we gonna to use? _Soul

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Ramesh Rai 18 July 2013

beautiful lines In the heart of an angel lies the truth In the heart of the few lies the devil and damnation praiseworthy 10+++++++++++

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Geetha Jayakumar 18 July 2013

Short and sweet. Very well written.Good write.

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Teddy Opundo 17 July 2013

Short and perfect.Openly understood

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Valerie Dohren 15 July 2013

Me being the eternal pessimist, I would say in the heart of the many lies the devil.... Especially like the first stanza.

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David Wood 15 July 2013

Short and sweet Dave and a good message.

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Payal Parande 14 July 2013

brilliant sir with few words you have told us so much......

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Juan Olivarez 14 July 2013

Wow. Short and to the point. Great piece Dave.

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Hazel Durham 13 July 2013

The truth will set you free! The devil and damnation makes people prisoners! Great write!

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Yasmin Khan 12 July 2013

Yes, it's our heart that is the abode of either angels or Satan.

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R.j. Wynn 12 July 2013

Great idea, the few, and good rhyme and rhythm to.

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