Saturday, June 1, 2013

In The Hall Of Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

I gaze-and gaze into celestial stretch
In solitude, on a dream’s edge
Night’s backdrop hung deep and dark
And play of light on the dark stage starts
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Yasmin Khan
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Saadat Tahir 06 June 2013

It’s a fabulous poem….enjoyed the astronomical treat.... A lovely panoramic view of the night sky. A stunning imagery is created in a painted galactic canvas I wanted to pick out a verse to quote… … ctrl C …Ctrl v… del…… ctrl C …Ctrl v… del…… ctrl C …Ctrl v… del… Sigh! And then just gave it up Each and every line was so endearing that I decided cant quote the whole poem… so let it go.. :) I being a classical sort with tradition built into my system so far as poetry goes… couldn’t decide where to stand with you on your mythological rich pickings, you hopped energetically over millennia… as if in a time machine….I could have been on Aladdin’s carpet zipping across the vistas and cosmos… nebula here the star spangled milky way there. Stay blessed :)

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Somanathan Iyer 02 June 2013

wonderfully depicted, Nice poem.

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Kanav Justa 01 June 2013

wonderful use of words in your poem, , , nice

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Farah Ilyas 01 June 2013

i Always wonder strucked whenever i read your poem, diction, scene, flawless flow of poetry, you apt for, always has spell bounding effect, great poem verily.

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