In The Grey Zone Comments

the last stanza is the right culmination of the logic made in the poem! ! !

To the tune of 'silence is golden', even yor still nature imagery is remarkable to read my sis poetes frm acros d partition. :)

Jasmine, you have beautifully captured grey zone in canvass. Life stands still....quietness fills everywhere... Beautiful write. Loved it.

There are moments when life stands still and the entire world in a state of doldrum! An inertia hangs around us when we are not able to say whether we are happy or sad! This grey state of life is poignantly put! !

good one grey the greying groovy

uncertainty is a gray zone and that's where we live you described it very well

sometimes it is good to stand still. catch a breath of fresh air. lovely poem