In The Golden Years Comments

....I don't know what to add stalwarts have already done her the honours and you sir in equal measure can I ever say lesser or much more the world you does a dore YOUR PATIENCE DILIGENCE AND MARKED TRANSLATION is what makes poet me to both ENGLISH VERSION AND HINDI ENDEAR IN EQUAL MEASURE i SHAN'T SAY FIFTY FIFTY BUT HUNDRED MAY BE Thanks for the English version Hindi mine you know it is tootie fruity lol ji RM AND SAVITA MAA'M

Savita ji, this is a fabulous poem that i fully identify with. I just read the wonderful translation by Rajnish ji. Only during golden years of our life that we can let our imagination flow with the wind, so care free and nice. Loved the poem.......10

The poem calls for creating a carefree world which a poet is inclined to create with his imagination when away from family and professional duties. Thanks a lot for sharing this amazing poem. This goes into MyPoemList: Beyond these vales and valleys Lies a world of my imagination

The way of presentation of this poem is so fantastic. The beginning line is much amusing and it is...Hocus-pocus is life without a focus! which is true. A beautiful poem so nicely executed.

Savita, such a well written poem...............