Friday, June 13, 2008

In The Garden (Failed Pantoum) Comments

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In The Garden

Upon Spring's birth, Winter's death.
Seeds and eggs and babes abound.
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Vidyadhar Durgekar 08 July 2008

Excellent imagery compsoed with beautiful diction

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Duncan Wyllie 06 July 2008

as Summer draws in the crowds and ushers Autumn over the hill. That's very clever, great thinking behind this one Love duncan X

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