Monday, May 28, 2018

In The Garden Comments

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In the garden I saw a Rose
It stood alone and seemed so sad,
But, I knew it was strong and made others glad
So, I wrote this one prose.
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Randy McClave
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Dr Antony Theodore 28 May 2018

Beautiful Rose with your lingering scent You remind me of a woman that I had once known, nature, love, flower, remembrance. thank u dear poet for this poem which becomes a symbol of desire..... i like the rose.. tony

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Joy Johnson 28 May 2018

THIS CAN BE TRUE TO SMELL AS SWEET AS A ROSE TO TOUCH THE SOFTNESS WITH GENLTENESS LIKE THAT OF A SWEETWOMAN YET HER SENSES CAN BE PAINFUL IF SHE FAILS YOU WITH A THIS IS POETRY I LIKE YOUR STYLEOF EXPRESSION

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