In The Foam Comments

but i read the Poet's Notes. thanks. and i'll forward to Brian Johnston who has a physics background and some of his poems deal with physics in part. bri :)

Truthfully, i only read to the third line or so, soooooooooooo i can't give a well-informed comment. it was looking a bit foreboding to me, a simpleton. so i'll look at one or two others. ;) bri :)

A most intriguing and exciting account of the uncertainty principle. Actually, Denis, I think this is one of the best poems I've read in the very long time. The coalescing and dissolving of your images are genuinely poetic. I'm a great admirer of St Jean Perse who uses prose poems to great effect and this poem on an important subject is equally effective.

Amazingly imagined perception is wisely presented in this space-time foam poem.10