In The Eddying Current Comments

We appear uninvited and depart unnoticed leaving no foot prints or monuments proclaiming, we ever existed......touching expression with nice theme. A brilliant poem.

in this eddying flux of life What am I…………? Just one of a milling crowd….. A mote in this cosmos grandiose! ......great lines.

This is truly a master piece so beautifully crafted with so touching words....Valsa....I am speechless....... All the lines are wonderfully structured to make this piece eternal......a great piece indeed shall be ever remembered.....10/10

A masterpiece of a poem, indeed.I was overwhelmed. True in the Grand Design of God we are really insignificant But we have to play our part. You are a great poet and so many of us in P.H.enjoy your lovely poems.You'll surely be remembered.Thanks for the beautiful write and my best wishes to you to churn out more and more.

Don't sell yourself short-you are amighty good poet and i am enjoying tour woek-just keeop on, please

We can only make a difference in the time we have here, and sometimes we are remembered for a song, or a poem or a kind act. But, true in time all will one day be forgotten.

Stunning write, very insightful, but no man is an island entire unto himself, each is a piece of the continent, a part of the main..

In the eddying current we are all caught up for some time as the crux of life has to tell a different story. What is indispensable is the will power to swim across the mighty currents. As a true believer you may as well feel and say, Life on the earth is just a preparation for the eternal life after death Kudos to the poet in you once again

Valsa, this is beautiful. Absolutely love the message. Perfectly done. My vote is a 10+