Friday, November 14, 2008

In The Earth, People Sleep Comments

Rating: 4.7

In the earth, people sleep
Branches swing
As small birds sing
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Patti Masterman 30 January 2009

This poem has clean lines and a beautiful message.

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Liz Thaugally 23 November 2008

love this, the simplicity and worldy observation of human nature and wonder.10/10.

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indeed...frm mud we come, and mud we become...nothing but dust is us...

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Bob Blackwell 15 November 2008

Made me think all the life we have is Now. We must not fear death, as you say its just release. But life goes on. I love poems that make me think, long after I have read, this is one of those. Thank you Rani. Bob

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