Friday, May 13, 2011

In The Dungeon Comments

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In the dungeon
Spiked traps fall in intervals from above
Poison also drips from above
Chains and dead prisoner's bones rattle
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Justin Gildow
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Bri Edwards 29 April 2017

Chains and dead prisoner's bones rattle throughout...............maybe you want prisoners'? i was negotiating the purchase of a nice dungeon to move into with my wife and kids. but, after reading this, i have decided on an apartment. bri ;) sounds a bit threatening; i'm glad you met the challenge and lived to tell of it! to MyPoemList.

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Buried Alive 13 May 2011

i was buried in the dungeon but i survived as well. i will never return to the horror of the dungeon. vivid descriptive writing

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